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we had the final test about all this topics,and at the final part of the test we wrote a narrative paragraph about one topic i choose "the holiday in the year that you most like is "here is the correction:
The holiday in the year that i most like is the new year day.In new year day my family are all together,they have the overall felling of having a good time, have fun with a lot of people, and share with them in a beautiful diner.Also they can listen to music and dance to the rythm in a big colorfull party (happiness is in the air).When it is twelve o´clock at midnight i enjoy to give hugs to the people that i love and five them the best wishes,new ideas,newplans,new loves,and good health.The new year day is a time to be together with my family and enjoy the things that they like,such as the overall feeling of have a good time with others,or the things that i like,that finally are to stay with the people that i love and have a grat time, that´s why new year day is the holiday that i like the most.
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