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composition

viernes, 19 de diciembre de 2014

Portafolio conclusions

                                               "Portafolio Conclusions"

In conclusion I would like to say that all objectives in this course were met from reading each week to increase my vocabulary to understand the writing process with their respective rules, I really liked constantly create new texts and that each was corrected to stay the idea expressed correctly.
objectives achieved!!

content test

                                                              "content test"

                -FANBOYS
                      - Comma uses
                      -Compound sentences
         we had the final test about all this topics,and at the final part of the test we wrote a narrative paragraph about one topic i choose "the holiday in the year that you most like is "here is the correction:



               The holiday in the year that i most like is the new year day.In new year day my family are all together,they have the overall felling of having a good time, have fun with a lot of people, and share with them in a beautiful diner.Also they can listen to music and dance to the rythm in a big colorfull party (happiness is in the air).When it is twelve o´clock at midnight i enjoy to give hugs to the people that i love and five them the best wishes,new ideas,newplans,new loves,and good health.The new year day is a time to be together with my family and enjoy the things that they like,such as the overall feeling of have a good time with others,or the things that i like,that finally  are to  stay with the  people that i love and have a grat time, that´s why new year day is the holiday that i like the most.
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                                                  write always before the giving time...is horrible

Process of writing

                                                 "process of writing"
             -get ideas 
             -organise
             -write
             -check 
    ACTIVITY :          "early bird /night" 
             brainstorm: get up,breakfast,gym,take a shower,stufy,do things.
                   organise: I like the morning because i feel more energy
                                          take a shower
                                          at the afternoon i go to the gym
                                          this is the productin part of the day
                                         sometimes i play the guitar and study
                  check: I like the mornin because at this time of the day y feel more energetic,i love to take showers aerly in the mornin,when i in my house in the morning i watch the news and have breackfast,sometimes i have to do things..
              
i always love to get up early and do all the things that i have to at time.

Weekly reading

                                                     Weekly Reading 
            -"How did he do it"
                        -"Fish story"
                        -"seattle and texas"
                       -"the godfather"
when i knew that we have to read weekly ,that make me very happy and then when i read the books they were so funny and i enjoy every moment reading them, was a very interest idea,but the moment when the teacher asked the questions i felt very scared.

lunes, 15 de diciembre de 2014

first questions

                                             When do you write ?
         -when i am in class 
         -when i want to create a text 
         -when i have to put in order some ideas 
         - when i have to do my homework 




                                               Why do you write ?

         - Because i feel the necesity to express something 
         -Because i need to remember things 
         -Because i have to..

ABOUT ME

                                              A LITTLE ABOUT ME
                  My name is Maria Antonella , i was born in Iquique on August 9th,1995. I am the youngest of  5 siblings that are two brothers,two sisters, and me. I live with my parents and one of my brothers,I have two dogs and one cat that I love with my heart. I studied 13 years in the same school called ¨Samca Arumanti ¨ and this year I started the University and I am so happy with my career.In  my free time I practice rugby and travel to others places to play  with others teams.
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welcome

                                                       WELCOME
               This portafolio was created to show all the contents that we treat all the semester and how i recognice my mistakes and progress during the months,you will see the process of writing ,the different lectures,the test ,the text that i create (one of them ) all the things that i have done during the semester i hope you enjoy my job.